Unsigned - Glc- emptiness

This is in 4/4 time (yes I put in the all important time) the layout is similar too staff, ex. (23 are 8th notes while 2 is a 4th note and 1~ is a whole note) Verse G--------------|------------------|-----------------|-----------------|-----------------|--------------|----------- D--------------|------------------|-----------------|-----------------|-----------------|--------------|----------- A--------------|------------------|---223--3-4-2-|-----------------|-----------------|--------------|-------------| E---2---3-----|----5--2---3--4-|-----------------|---1-1-0-----8-|--7~------------|--4~---------|---2~-------|--0~- Chorus G--------------|------------------|-----------------|-----------------|-----------------|--------------|----------| D--------------|------------------|-----------------|-----------------|-----------------|--------------|----------| A--2-23---5-4|----82-45--2--3|-1--2-----------|-----------------|-2--23---43---|--------------|-------------|-----| E---------------|------------------|---------0---5-|-54---23--4--2-|----------------|---0~--------|----1~---|-5~-- Verse x2 Chorus Verse Chorus x2 (the first submission was a fluke)